Narritve

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this my narrative learning .
There was two poko boys one name was Uli and the other one was Poko.They are twelve years old they look like there crazy . One lived in Samoa that was Poko and Uli lived in tonga .Uli has a eye patch cause a coconut in Tonga went flying down from a tree and hit his eye, he is tall and speaks like a fob. Poko look liked a dead man he had one side of his head bold and the other with bushy hair he had his mouth in one side and his eyes are crossed eyed and they are hug e and very fat and short.Poko lived on top of the palm tree and uli lived on top of the coconut Tree they always fall off when there sleep when Uli falls down the coconut comes down and falls on him when Poko falls down the Palm leaves covers him and no one knows where he is . in the mean time poko woke up and something came in the mail it said if u come to nz to fight against the rock for 2 thousands dollars poko accept it and he left on his airplane and flew to nz. On the other side uli was going to the airport to go to america and help soldiers fight against afghanistan.Suddenly uli and poko arrived in the same plane then at 2am as they were in the plane, lightning struck one of their wings as their plane went tumbling down.Splash as the plane came down to the sea the vibration on the water made big waves that went over people.Lucky uli was trained to be soldier he already knew how to swim but poko he had a hard time trying to swim he never listened when he was young when it